Jane's Poem-she didn't want me to post this, but I did
A Storm, by Jane Stinchield
The wind shakes the treesand howls in the night
Birds fly across a huge blue blanket of sky
that is turning dark with clouds
Water splashes as it cuts
through hills and mountains
An ocean crashes
on the sand
roaring like thunder
Rain pours down
making mud of dirt
The waves become rough
and wildly toss themselves to and fro
Thunder booms
and lightning lights the almost black sky
It rains all night.
And all day
It smells of moist earth
And salty sea air
Roses are dripping with water
Grass grows taller,
more green
After the storm
10 Comments:
Good job Jane.
from geof. not darla
I love your poem, Jane! It reminded me of the rainstorm we had when we camped in yurts on the Oregon coast. Beautiful.
Holy cow Jane, that is a beautiful poem...so vivid. You are very talented, keep it up.
You know your Uncle Geof. loves poetry, Jane. Keep it up!! You definately have talent!
oh my word janie that is incredible!! you can tell you come from very creative, intelligent parents. keep at it sweets. you should turn this into the new era or something. i could really picture the storm.
very good Jane. You are a talented poet. Can you recite it in front of a candle???
Who the H is Brent?!?
I don't know. I don't think it's Jane's Uncle Brent (Mike's brother), but it could be???
Thanks you guys!!!
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