Saturday, November 14, 2009

Jane's Poem-she didn't want me to post this, but I did

A Storm, by Jane Stinchield

The wind shakes the trees
and howls in the night
Birds fly across a huge blue blanket of sky
that is turning dark with clouds
Water splashes as it cuts
through hills and mountains
An ocean crashes
on the sand
roaring like thunder
Rain pours down
making mud of dirt
The waves become rough
and wildly toss themselves to and fro
Thunder booms
and lightning lights the almost black sky
It rains all night.

And all day
It smells of moist earth
And salty sea air
Roses are dripping with water
Grass grows taller,
more green
After the storm

10 Comments:

At 1:15 PM , Blogger Darla said...

Good job Jane.

 
At 1:15 PM , Blogger Darla said...

from geof. not darla

 
At 2:31 PM , Blogger Mindi said...

I love your poem, Jane! It reminded me of the rainstorm we had when we camped in yurts on the Oregon coast. Beautiful.

 
At 3:40 PM , Blogger Jessica said...

Holy cow Jane, that is a beautiful poem...so vivid. You are very talented, keep it up.

 
At 6:33 PM , Blogger Darla said...

You know your Uncle Geof. loves poetry, Jane. Keep it up!! You definately have talent!

 
At 9:05 PM , Blogger Meags said...

oh my word janie that is incredible!! you can tell you come from very creative, intelligent parents. keep at it sweets. you should turn this into the new era or something. i could really picture the storm.

 
At 4:30 PM , Blogger Brent said...

very good Jane. You are a talented poet. Can you recite it in front of a candle???

 
At 5:04 PM , Blogger Jessica said...

Who the H is Brent?!?

 
At 9:19 PM , Blogger Brooke said...

I don't know. I don't think it's Jane's Uncle Brent (Mike's brother), but it could be???

 
At 6:12 PM , Blogger Jane said...

Thanks you guys!!!

 

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